Here's how tagging works
(although some of you already know this):
1. Go to page 77 of your current MS, WIP.
2. Go to line 7.
3. Copy down the next 7 lines, sentences or paragraphs and
post them as they are written.
4. Tag 7 authors.
5. Let them know.
Soooooo, here are my 7 sentences: (The car in question is a Model-T)
All at once everything returned to me--Father's struggles to keep the top up; rain pouring down; all of us pushing to free the wheels from the mire.
A wave of dizziness washed over me, and I leaned against the doorjamb. Something inside me gave way, and tears gushed out, drenching my face. A long moan broke loose from me, hanging in the air before it turned into racking sobs.
Michael was nowhere to be seen, but I heard the clatter of his steps and the back porch's door bang as if he had flown up the stairs.
I wiped my eyes and blew my nose. If I went inside now, everyone would see my face.
And now for the next 7 "tagees":
I am looking forward to their 7 sentences, as I know you are. Go check them out, as they have good posts to read.
Meanwhile, any feedback you have for my 7 sentences I'll certainly appreciate.